Help and Advice From Others

• Batman Soundtrack- Although picked by our group, we got advice from other and encouragement to use this as our background music piece. We got told that it worked very well with our film and juxtaposed the type of film it would have normally been played in.
• Very first shot with the spade- We originally stuck the spade in the ground and started wiggling it about. We got told that it was too long and should just dig the spade in to the ground and then cut the shot.
• Voice over- The voice over we have been advised to try it and see if it works. As a group however, we haven't yet tried it and are deciding still whether to have it or not.
• Extra shots of the woman- We had been advised to add some more shots of the main woman (played by Mairyn Heather) so you can clearly see that she sees the burial and then runs to tell the police.

(Patrick Henbury & Alex D)